This scene was from a story about Shane. It was deleted because it was violent.
The scene starts with him running through the forest...
He didn’t stop until he tripped over
a wire. A net flew up and trapped him inside it. He tried to reach
the dagger or the short sword but they had both fallen through the
net. The moon rose high above the treetops. He could see stars above
him. He heard footsteps walking towards him. He hoped it wasn’t a
wild animal. A red haired lady walked through the bushes. She cut the
rope, the net fell on the ground. Shane struggled to get out of the
net. Two men took the net off of him. “You’re the one who keeps
tripping our traps aren’t you?” He shook his head, “No, I was
just running through the forest so I wouldn’t get shot.” The lady
laughed, “Take him in to the camp. We’ll get him to talk.” The
men held him by the arms and walked him to a camp, a big truck with a
cage on the back was parked next to tents. A blonde haired girl was
stirring a pot over a camp fire. The girl was wearing a white
strapless dress that went down to her ankles. What really caught his
attantion though was the marking of a snake on her arm. The two men
let go of him, “Sit,” said the red haired lady. Shane sat in
front of a log near the fire. The blonde haired girl looked at him
smiling, she whispered something into the lady’s ear. One of the
men shot a glance at the girl before sitting down next to the
red haired lady. The lady took a bowl from the girl, “We’re
looking for new outlaws for our group. Will you join us?” Shane
didn’t know what to say, if he said no they might kill him. He
decided to join the group and then the first chance he got he would
leave. “Sure,” One of the men got up. The lady smiled and drank
from the bowl. “Of course you’ll have to get branded before
you’re an official member.” The man who got up put the end of an
iron bar in the fire. The lady pointed at him, “That’s Brandon,”
she pointed to the guy next to her, “He’s Derrick,” She pointed
to the blonde haired girl, “She’s Irene,” she pointed at
herself, “I’m Vira,” she pointed at him. “I’m Shane,” he
said, They all grew silent. Vira grinned, “The Morphers wiped your
memory?” He nodded. Vira glanced at Irene, “Since you escaped the
Morphers again you are offically an outlaw. I’ll give you your
weapons after your branded.” She took the iron out of the fire. The
two men held him down. Vira pressed the end of the iron on his skin.
He screamed in pain. She took it off and put it back on it the same
spot. He screamed again and again, and she continued the same
process. When she had finally stopped the men let go. He rolled up
into a ball, he gritted his teeth to prevent screaming. His arm hurt
so bad he wanted to yell at Vira but he restrained
himself. A bowl of water was dumped on him. The water splashed on his
arm, the pain slowly went away. Vira smirked, “Welcome to the
group.” Shane sat up, he looked at his arm. His arm started to
bleed from the branding. Vira looked at Irene, “Take him to the
tent and cleanse the wound.” Irene nodded, she helped Shane to his
feet. She led him into a tent. “Sit on the mat.” He sat on a
colorful mat. She poured water into a bowl. She took a cloth from a
basket. She sat next to him and dabbed the wet cloth on his arm. She
was very gentle,“Shane, do you remember me?” He nodded, “The
name Irene does sound familular.” “Does your scar hurt?” She w
This is a scene in Stardust where Austin is actually able to talk to the red eye curse. I took this scene out because it didn't fit very well. This scene starts when Austin is eating with Camille...
He
could feel something jump within the back of his mind. What
was that?
He thought, shoving a mouthful of food into his mouth. He started to hear a faint whisper however no
one was talking. He listened intently but couldn't understand what it
was saying. Camille stared at him strangely, “Austin are you
alright? You look pale...” He stood up to leave, “I am feeling a
bit strange, I think I'll go lay down for a while.” He left the dining room and entered another. He laid on the bed trying to understand
what the voice is saying. “Speak louder.” he whispered. Apparently
it had heard him, because the voice started to boom through his mind.
He held his head, “Ow! A little softer than that!” he yelled. The
voice softened, Escape,
we need to escape... He
became confused, “Escape from what? Who are you? And how can you
communicate with me?” Morvian,
Virus, and I don't know...
It took him some time to realize that it answered all three
questions. “Who's Morvian? And if your the virus why haven't you
killed me yet?” Father
is Morvian, and I have no reason to kill you.
The Virus replied. If
you die so do I.
“Then why did you possess me years ago?” I
was forced to by Morvian...
He was confused, he thought the curse was evil however it was only
being controlled by his father, Morvian. He wasn't going to trust the
virus. However it was pretty cool to communicate with it, it was like
it had a mind of its own. The virus continued, We
need to escape from Morvian or he'll gain control again. Same with
Sevene however she is in his control still.
“How can we stop him?” he asked curiously. I
don't know I only know as much as you do. “What's
your name?” he asked. It was silent, Austin waited patiently for an
answer. isn't
my name virus or red eye curse?
It replied.
“I meant what should I
call
you?” There was silence, it seemed like it didn't want to answer.
Why
does it matter if I have a name?
I'm
not your pet...
It answered. “How about Fred? Or maybe Arnold?” Austin said
blurting out the first names he could think of. “Or Bob.” Stop
blurting out the first thing that pops in your head!
Someone knocked softly on the door. “Come in.” Austin said.
Morvian peeked into the room. Prevent
eye contact, look at his forehead.
“I can hear you in the other room. Why are you talking to
yourself?” Austin pretended to put his arm around someone, “This
is my imaginary friend Bob.” Austin stared at Morvian's forehead
with a goofy grin on his face. Morvian stared at him concerned, “Are
you alright?” Austin nodded, “Just talking with Bob.” Morvian
left the room shutting the door. We're
doomed... “Why?
I think he bought it.” Your
stupid grin gave it away.
“How did you know I was grinning?” I
live in the same body as you. I feel what you feel, hear what you
hear, and see what you see. It's just like when your in my place.
“Can you still do that?” Yes,
however I won't. If you die I die
This scene is from Kia and Zale 2. I took it out because Zale was too open and friendly. This scene starts in a dark alley...
“This
place isn't very safe to talk.” Zale grabbed her arm, he pulled her
into a shadow. He and Kia stood in a wooden room with a couch. Kia
saw her duffel bag, staff, and other things neatly organized on
shelves. He's
a neat freak...
Zale
sat down, “Ask three questions and I'll try to answer them.” Kia
thought for a second before asking, “What was your life before you
became immortal?” Zale thought for s second before answering,“I
was taken from my village to fight a war. They put me through
training in basic combat and advanced. When I came of age I received
immortality.” Zale grimaced. Kia could tell he wasn't enjoying this.
“You don't have to tell me this.” Zale shrugged, “It's in the
past, It's history now.” Kia grinned, Was
he trying to make a joke?
“Fine, what happened after you received immortality?”
Zale
held up the soul stone, “Every person was given a soul stone and
taught how to use it. I met your first generation of family, and gave
them the soul stone to protect it. Later on when I met your father
and mother, they rescued me from Castillo. I took the beast that
cursed you to repay their kindness. One question left.” Zale
smiled.
Kia
began to think, Took
the beast that cursed me? That beast he had was mine?!
“That beast you had was mine?” she asked. Zale yawned, “Yes,”
He clasped his hands together, “No more questions. Now it's my turn
to ask you.” She blushed, “I never agreed to that.”
This scene is from Kia and Zale 2. This part was taken out because Zale doesn't have a descendant. This scene starts in the forest...
“I'd
like to go by myself.” Zale informed. Kia crossed her arms, “Fine, I'll set up
camp.”
Zale
jumped to his feet, “I'll be back at sunset.” Zale disappeared
into the shadows. Kia smiled devilishly, Now
I can go follow him!
She raced into the woods hoping she was going in the right direction.
Kia peeked through a bush, she saw a garden full of fruits and
vegetables. She snuck into the garden hiding behind a hedge. Kia saw a
women sitting by the fountain. Behind the garden was a huge house.
This
isn't a town, it's a house! Zale, why did you lie to me?
Why
are you following me?
She swerved around, “Zale...” She noticed he was hiding something
behind his back. “What are you hiding?” she whispered. Zale let
out a sigh, “Your going to laugh...” She smirked, “I promise I
won't.” Zale took a bouquet of flowers out from behind his back.
Kia covered her mouth trying not to laugh, “You love that women?”
Zale blushed, “Nothing of the sort, she's one of my descendants.”
Kia's mouth dropped, “You never told me you had a kid!” Zale
covered her mouth, “Not so loud you idiot.” he hissed. “If your
going to stay, be quiet.” Kia couldn't help but snicker.
Zale
walked out from behind the bush. He looked around the fountain for
the women. “Are those for me?” Zale turned around holding out the
bouquet. The women jumped back surprised, “Thanks...” she
cautiously took the flowers. “Who are you?” she asked. Zale
looked at the ground avoiding eye contact, “I am Michael.” The
women gasped, “My great grandmother told me stories about you.”
The women bowed, “I am Nicole.” When Nicole looked up he was
gone.
Zale
grabbed Kia's arm dragging her back into the forest. Kia stopped,
“You just left her there clueless! I'm going back!” Zale picked
her up slinging her over his shoulder. “You shouldn't have followed
me.” Kia pounded on his back, “Well it's not my fault for being
curious. You never tell me anything about your past!” she yelled.
Zale disappeared in a shadow taking her with him. Zale dropped her
onto the floor, “Have you ever thought I didn't tell you my past
for your protection?” He yelled firmly. Kia was speechless, I've
never thought about that... But what could he be protecting me from?
Zale sat down on the floor with a sigh, “Castillo threatened to
kill you. That's why I've been following you all these years.” Kia
smirked, “That was two hundred years ago! He's definitely dead by
now.” Zale stared at her confused, “I thought I told you, he's
immortal too.”
This scene is from The Protector's Past which I have finished. I took it out because it's not really what I had in mind for the story. This scene starts in a grassy field...
“What
happened to the other orb I gave you?” he asked. Kia shrugged, “I
don't know, Aidan took it from me.” Zale abruptly stopped, “So
that's his plan...” he mumbled, standing up. Kia became confused,
“Where are you going?” she asked. Zale popped the orb, “Back to
the fortress.” Kia grabbed his leg as he walked by her, “Why are
you going back?” she asked. He looked down at his leg; she was
hugging onto his ankle. “Because he'll try to create another person
with my strengths.” Kia
released his ankle, “Is that even possible?”
This scene is from The Protector's past. The idea of this scene was Zale is going to bring the mermaid back to the ocean. I deleted this scene because Zale was being too nice. The scene starts off in a cave...
Zale
unsheathed his knife, “Kia, take down the hammock.” He instructed
tossing her the knife. The mermaid watched him intently, “Your not
going to kill me for my blood?” she asked. Kia tossed Zale the
tattered hammock. He laid the hammock out beside her, “I'm not
going to kill you.” He informed, rolling her into the hammock. Zale
grabbed one end of the hammock. Kia get the other side, we're
taking this fish back to the ocean... Kia grabbed the other
side. They lifted the mermaid up off the ground. They
carried the mermaid out of the cave. The mermaid looked around at her
surroundings. She snatched a leaf off a bush inspecting it carefully.
“Where are you taking me?” she asked tossing the leaf aside.
More scenes will be posted later...
